The Pamir Paradyne Proposal by The Pamir Paradyne
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Finalist Evaluation
Judges'' comments
Finalist - Do Not Advance
SUBJECT: Climate CoLab Judging Results
Proposal: The Pamir Paradyne Proposa
Contest: Anticipating Climate Change in the Pamir Mountains
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[Additional comments from the Judges]
Judges' Comments
I don’t think this proposal directly responds to the contest challenge. Instead of offering concrete ways to bring together multiple kinds of data and ways of knowing to help keep traditional ecological calendars relevant now and in the future, the proposal suggests a very expensive experiment to explore a hypothesis about connections between biomes and people. Further the proposal is not participatory and doesn’t reference indigenous knowledge.
The proposal has good ideas but these would be more of research interests than a feasible project. The proposed use of bioelectromagnetic technologies is at best speculative. The plan for action is practically missing.
Seems like the community is being used for a project that scientist want to explore- I am not seeing anything that indicates that the community has been consulted about such an endeavor. Is it culturally appropriate?
Semi-Finalist Evaluation
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Judges'' comments
SUBJECT: Your proposal has been selected as a Semi-Finalist!
Congratulations! Your proposal, The Pamri Paradyn Proposal in the Anticipating Climate Change in the Pamir Mountains contest, has been selected to advance to the Semi-Finalists round.
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Contest Judges
Judges' Feedback:
The proposed studies under the three themes are all interesting but they are research tasks whose outcomes are likely to be relevant to the theme of the contest. The use of advanced technologies mentioned in the proposal would be fruitful when the correlations between the sensor data and variables/characteristics familiar to the farmers are established.
Michael Hayes Jun 17, 2015 08:30
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Thank you for the feedback.
Michael
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