Alexandra Nadeau




Catalyst


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Hi Nathanaël and Ulysse,

You're addressing an interesting issue in your proposal, and thank you for joining the challenge!

Here are some ideas for your project to be more defined. It'd be interesting if you elaborate more on the «smart» aspects of your proposal. By that, I mean to explain more what role do smart technologies are playing in helping the transition to a higher use of bikes and public transports. 

I see there are still some sections of the proposal that need to be filled, so it'd be great if you could write the information that is missing. In your summary, you wrote that you'd explain more which actions you propose, but this section is still empty, and it'd be interesting to learn more about those. It might be interesting to shorten your summary and to include more info in other parts of the proposal.

Good luck!


Ulysse Arnaud




Member


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Proposal
contributor

Hey ! Thanks for your feedback.

We currently work on updating the project description with your feedback in mind. We should update the online version by the end of the end. Thanks again !

 


Ulysse Arnaud




Member


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Proposal
contributor

Hey ! Thanks for your feedback.

We currently work on updating the project description with your feedback in mind. We should update the online version by the end of the week. Thanks again !

 


Alexandra Nadeau




Catalyst


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Hi Nathanaël and Ulysse,

Thank you for your answer and for taking the time to update your proposal.

Do you think it will be possible to tell me what you will have changed, so we can keep track of the evolution of your project?

Don't hesitate if you have any questions.

Thank you!


Ashley Pilipiszyn




Fellow


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Hi Nathanaël and Ulysse! Great proposal! Increased public transportation and biking in urban areas definitely are key pressure points for climate-smart cities! In your proposal, you provide a lot of great ideas and information - I think you could strengthen your proposal even more by defining one or two key technologies that you will focus on to implement in a city and also specify your pilot city as well because that will have a massive impact on how you will layout your action plan. Good luck! 


Nathanaël Langlois




Member


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Proposal
creator

Hey!

Thanks for your feedbacks. We've been working a lot on them and have made significant improvements to add some explanations to our ideas.

Concerning the one or two key technologies apilipszyn mentioned, we do have pretty good idea on how we could implement for example our phone-charging system for bikes, but I don't see in which section that would fit. As for the pilot city, we haven't really talked about it. We'll think about it and add it during the semi-final revision time if we get there. It's actually a really good idea and would probably make our proposal clearer, too bad we didn't think about that :/

Thanks again!

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