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Alexandra Nadeau

Apr 8, 2016
11:19

Catalyst


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Hi Rosemary,

Thank you for your proposal. I think you're off to a good start with the explanation of the many fields of action to reduce urban emissions. I see that there are still sections in your proposal that aren't filled yet, so it'd be great if you could complete the proposal. 

Also, so far, you haven't proposed a concrete project, something you want to accomplish and the plan to achieve it. You could choose a specific place or theme to apply some of the ideas you've mentioned in your proposal. That would make us understand more what you're planning on doing. 

You also mention VAWT in your opening pitch, but you don't explain what it is in your proposal. Is this a central aspect of your proposal? If so, more information would be great. 

Looking forward to seeing the changes in your proposal!


Alexandra Nadeau

May 9, 2016
09:51

Catalyst


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Hi Rosemary,

I was wondering if you had time to take a look at the comments I've sent you regarding your proposal? There is still time until the end of the challenge, if you were planning on doing some changes or modify anything!

If so, would it be possible to tell me what you have changed, so we can keep track of the evolution of your project?

Don't hesitate if you have any questions.

Thank you!


Ashley Pilipiszyn

May 22, 2016
09:15

Fellow


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Hi Rosemary, 

Your present a number of great ideas for a sustainable city from VAWTs to various use of renewables at home like solar and wind. I think your proposal would be much stronger if you choose just one of these proposed methods and then develop a concrete action plan on how to implement. It will be easier to draft a timeline and budget from this as well. Great start, looking forward to seeing this proposal go a bit deeper! 

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